Not bad, bro.If you don't mind a quick word of advice, don't let the eye that you see the least of (due to the tilt of the head) touch the edge of the face. If you end it just a little bit short there, it helps keep the perspective looking right, or at least that's how it was explained to me.
I only know Lynda of your girls, by name that is. Lynda would be always good to see, but you can include any you like. A girl with white fur was particularly cute, maybe that one?